Writing scenes

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Scenes are mini-stories:1

Each scene is a mini-story, with a beginning, middle, and end of its own. At the end of each scene, at least one of the characters must have gone through some sort of change.

Ingermanson defines two types of scenes: goal-oriented and reaction-oriented. A goal-oriented scene has the following consecutive elements:

  1. goal (clear and specific)
  2. conflict (obstacles)
  3. setback/disaster

On the other hand, a reaction scene has the following consecutive elements:

  1. reaction (emotional response to disaster)
  2. dilemma (no good options, reason through them)
  3. decision

Ingermanson also states that goals (in goal-oriented scenes) and decisions (in reaction scenes) should be simple, objective, worthwhile, achievable, and difficult.

Weiland2 calls goal-oriented scenes just “Scenes” (with uppercase S) and reaction scenes “Sequels” (also with uppercase S),3 but uses the same three consecutive elements as Ingermanson.


  1. Randall Ingermanson and Peter Economy, Writing Fiction For Dummies (Hoboken, N.J.: Wiley Publishing, Inc., 2010). ↩︎

  2. K. M. Weiland, Structuring your novel: essential keys for writing an outstanding story (Scottsbluff, Neb: PenForASword Publishing, 2013). ↩︎

  3. This likely comes from Dwight Swain’s book. ↩︎

Note last edited November 2024.
Incoming links: Scene (story unit).