Weeknotes 2024 W36: That NaNoWriMo thing

September 2​–​8, 2024
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NaNoWriMo put something out about their stance on AI,3 and, boy is it a garbage take:

We also want to be clear in our belief that the categorical condemnation of Artificial Intelligence has classist and ableist undertones, and that questions around the use of AI tie to questions around privilege.

Condemning the use of AI is classist and ableist, they say. I disagree. Their three-pronged explanation is wrong, too:

I’ve written before about how low of an opinion I have about this tech.5 I’m not going to rehash my arguments here; go take a peek at my previous writing if you’d like.

About NaNoWriMo specifically, though: using generative AI takes away the fun and the challenge of writing a novel. In fact, it entirely misses the point of why you’d do this in the first place!

Creative people do not benefit from generative “AI.” It is the tech companies and their investors who incessantly push their LLM tech onto others, and people in power who demand higher and higher productivity.6

The fun about writing a novel is the process, not the output. The output of generative AI is regurgitated mediocrity, and I don’t think anybody wants to read an AI-generated novel.

There are good non-AI tools out there, like thesauruses and dictionaries, dictation software, spelling and grammar checkers, writing prompts, and more. Those are often free or at least cheap — much cheaper than the generative AI tools out there.

Learning how to write is part of the fun, too! The shortcut that generative AI promises is that you don’t need to learn but can get straight to the good stuff — creating the content you want — but then you’ve cheated yourself out of having fun.

Learning is not just fun, but essential. We cannot offload the hard work onto generative AI, because then we’ll stop learning how to learn. Imagine a generation of people who don’t know how to create, and only know how to use generative AI — a certainly dystopian future.

Perhaps what bothers me the most is that NaNoWriMo dresses up generative AI as if it is this power for democracy and fairness and justice. They couldn’t be more wrong; the people who make and promoting generative AI technology think the diametrical opposite.

Bizarrely, even the AI company that sponsors NaNoWriMo disagrees with NaNoWriMo’s stance on AI:

We fundamentally disagree with the sentiment that criticism of AI tools in [sic] inherently ableist or classist.7

The good news is that creative writing of any sort can be done entirely independently from NaNoWriMo.


Generative AI is also a fluff generator. If I provide a 20-word prompt and I get a 2000-word output, then only 20/2000=120 / 2000 = 1% of the story is going to have meaning; the remaining 99% of the words will be nothing but fluff — meaningless filler that nobody wants to read.8

When I edit a draft, I decide — like any good writer, I suppose — on every word that goes into the draft. Each word is chosen for a specific purpose. If a word doesn’t fit the purpose, it gets replaced or cut. Generative AI can’t do that.

You could go over the output of a generative AI model and edit the heck out of it until it fits what you wanted, but that defeats the purpose of using a generative AI model in the first place.

This applies to other media as well, like images and video. When I see an AI-generated image or video, I know that there are a thousand elements in there that were not deliberately created by the author. It’s mostly incidental, which is the reason AI-generated content feels so bizarre, so wrong, so otherworldly.

No matter how good and realistic generative AI will get, it cannot surpass human creativity specifically because there is no human involvement.

Humans create art to tell stories and share their experiences. Generative AI cannot tell stories and does not experience, and it is therefore fundamentally incapable of generating art — no matter how advanced the technology gets.


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  1. Pica and Elite refer to pitch. Pica is 10 pitch (horizontally 10 characters per inch), and Elite is 12 pitch (12 characters per inch). As I understand it, both are 12 points: 72 points per inch, vertically, and 6 lines per inch, thus 12 points per line. ↩︎

  2. I first wrote about the thermal throttling issues back in Week­notes 2022 W40: Fire↩︎

  3. See also my note on Generative AI. And yes, I grew sick of putting “AI” in quotes. ↩︎

  4. It is very costly for the environment, too; AI is fueling the climate collapse. ↩︎

  5. e.g. in Week­notes 2024 W15: String of bad luck and Week­notes 2024 W32: AI cult↩︎

  6. An executive at my previous employer stated that employees could choose either using AI or get used to twelve-hour working days. A coworker assured me it was just tongue-in-cheek, but — is it really? ↩︎

  7. This citation and the one above both had grammatical mistakes. I find this curious, because neither organization/company seems to be using the technology that they claim to be so fond of. Both errors were caught by the built-in macOS grammar and spelling checker. ↩︎

  8. Notion has this “Make longer” feature, which takes a sentence as input, and uses a LLM to spit out something that has more words. Why this feature exists is beyond me; I cannot imagine anyone deliberately wanting filler content. ↩︎

  9. Moonlight, directed by Barry Jenkins, written by Barry Jenkins and Tarell Alvin McCraney (A24, Plan B Entertainment, PASTEL, 2016). ↩︎

  10. Nimic, directed by Yorgos Lanthimos, written by Efthimis Filippou, Yorgos Lanthimos and David Kolbusz (Droga5, Droga5, Merman, 2020). ↩︎

  11. Midsommar, written and directed by Ari Aster (A24, B-Reel Films, Nordisk Film, 2019). ↩︎

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